关于”写姐姐“的英语作文范文3篇，作文题目：Writing about elder sister。以下是关于写姐姐的八年级英语范文，每篇作文均为满分范文带翻译。
高分英语作文1：Writing about elder sister
My sister's anger or love 1 His Sister Sarah helped him 2 my sister gave me this wonderful book 3 now she's retired she lives with her sister 4 my sister Yvonne lives with me in okenden cottage 5 his sister said he deliberately gave the hospital a false name and address.
I have a sister, she has an oval face, big eyes, small mouth, nose a bit fell off, she cut a short hair, looks very energetic, she has been studying these days, and almost every year SanHaoSheng will tell me her mother, old Shina, I think it is very bad Although her grades were very good, she also had one shortcoming. Once, her aunt who played computer games had to work overtime on Sundays. Because she went out, sister Zhuang Shui got up immediately.
She didn't wash her face, brush her teeth, and ran to Shufang Li. She didn't play computer games. Even her grandmother told her to eat with me.
I asked her to play with me. She pretended not to hear that Li Ye ignored our aunt. When she came home to eat, she swore, She reluctantly went back to her room to do the work I think my sister said, "although you have good grades, you should change your bad habit of playing computer games.
Let me admire you even more Ningbo Aiju first grade art school: Yan Yu comments: the article is well written and educational. Although the academic achievement of Yan Yu is not very outstanding, he is a sensible boy. I believe you can have good learning habits and do a good job Excellent students the article structure, through a sister's habit of writing events first, concise language can describe her sister's appearance, which is a very difficult thing for Yan Yu in the first year, but Yan Yu's description is in place.
You can see that a child usually observes the second paragraph very well and reflects his sister's character and habits through some events. The teacher can see that you are one through the second paragraph A very clear-cut child, the narration is also very complete and in place. The third paragraph of the basic event narration, written by my sister, is the highlight of your paragraph.
It is the profound enlightenment you get from this incident and the sublimation of the title of the article Comments: Yan Yu, who has a strong language ability, can also see through the essence of things, which is commendable for the first grade children. I hope you can write a better composition ; comment on teachers.
我有一个姐姐，她长着一张椭圆形的脸，大眼睛，小嘴，鼻子有点掉下来，她剪了一头短发，看起来很精神，她这几天都在学习，而且几乎每年三好生都会跟我说她妈妈老石娜比，我觉得很不好 虽然她的成绩很好，但她也有一个缺点，一次玩电脑游戏的阿姨星期天要加班，因为她出去了，庄水姐姐马上就起床了，不洗脸，刷牙又跑去树芳里不玩电脑游戏，连奶奶都叫她吃饭，我叫她陪我玩，她装作没听见丽叶不理我们阿姨等到她骂骂咧咧地回家吃饭时，她不情愿地回到自己的房间去做工作 我想我妹妹说，“虽然你成绩好，但你要把玩电脑游戏的坏习惯改变了，让我更佩服你 宁波爱菊 一年级艺术学校：严羽 点评：文章写得很好，很有教育意义，读出来的严羽虽然学业成绩不是很突出，但它是一个懂事的男孩，我相信你可以有良好的学习习惯，做一个优秀的学生 文章结构，通过一个姐姐习惯先写事件，简洁的语言可以描述姐姐的容貌，对于第一年的严羽来说是一件很难的事情，但是严羽的描述是到位的，你可以看到一个孩子平时很好的观察第二段，通过一些事件来反映妹妹的性格和习惯，老师通过第二段可以看出你是一个口齿非常清晰的孩子，叙述也很完整到位，基本的事件叙述由姐姐习惯写的第三段，是你这一段的亮点，是你通过这件事而得到的深刻启示是文章题目的升华 共点评：语言能力很强的严羽，严羽也能看透事物本质的现象，这对于一年级的孩子来说是可圈可点的，希望你能写一篇更好的作文 评老师。
My sister has a place. She is this year old. She likes playing piano, violin, watching TV and playing computer games.
But she likes reading books best. She is not in middle school. She is in class.
English is very good, Chinese and mathematics are very good. She is very kind and friendly. She always helps people like me.
Do you like your sister.